The poem in the post below this one, "October," is decades old and was published by the magazine, "Poetry Review," back then.
Now, I'd rewrite bits of it, tighten it up and get rid of that
toe-curlingly awful inversion at the start of it. The poetic past comes
back to haunt, eh!
Free verse and formal, narrative to confessional to modernist styles, interesting themes, striking images, differing viewpoints, depth of insight, the will to write and think - all are important to the poetry-minded.
Thursday, 29 October 2020
Ghosts
October
Crisp gold are the leaves in the
garden,
brittle for burning.
I choke on the musky smoke of the
bonfire
and my eye sting
as warm ashes are raked over scorched
ground.
Now I cannot tell
which are autumn’s leavings,
Thursday, 22 October 2020
Digging Deep
It's
clay and clings, this earth,
chopped,
shaped. It lies
in
lumps where weeds decay
and
garden debris burns.
New
soil fills the hollow
now,
strong for flower
after
leaf down where roots
keep,
distant from air,
where
future shoots probe safe.
Race over
the lawn, scrap
game away, stopped by
a
bite of balled geranium,
your
daughters argue above
tough
docks growing, son’s
eyes aslant
of grasslings
shivering
resilient
on that
clot of clumps
long in our sight.
Thursday, 15 October 2020
Bellevue
On
the edge of the New Town,
pilasters
piled in view,
terrace
grimed behind,
me
in months down to an island:
you
deck-hopping, a-chatter to all;
those
boats bobbing showy
Sunday, 11 October 2020
New Blogger Format
I am less than happy. The new format introduced in September will only allow double spacing, on 'Normal' as well as 'Paragraph,' not the single spacing I need. I'm a poet and write in discrete lines, not continuous lines as for prose. I've tried everything: altering the line height in the HTML source; posting to the Google/Blogger community; informing techies via Blogger feedback; going online to see if anyone has come up with a solution or workaround; asking friends who are tech savvy. Result? Nothing.
View the problem in the poem below this post - now solved.
Some doofus of a Google techie needs to take note and act. Meanwhile, I can only apologise to people who read my blog. I don't want to start a new one elsewhere as it would mean transposing all my previous posts here - an enormous task - but I will if the problem isn't solved. Google, you are on warning!
Problem solved. It seems you have to press SHIFT/ENTER for every single line - annoying if you have a long poem. Of course, Blogger techies told nobody about the workaround; users found out by experimenting. Anyway, I hope the information above is useful to people.
Saturday, 10 October 2020
Source
I’ve
had seventy seven years enough
to
reach for e-books, i-pads, dongles
diddling
in ports, piddling magic
muddling
away this middling while,
when
what I want is to float, ashes
from
Etna, on a flit wind over
the
hills and far blown to atoms
above
maps mindless of Eden’s roots
and
this glum of mud on the stream’s leach,
downstream
broad in a grey stink
by
London’s industrial, sewage churning
in water-sog
upstream of ruling stone.
Why
would I want to turn and go back,
a
salt wife for Lot’s leavings?
No.
I’ll slip from the wind where a clearing’s
untilled, fall in a
whichway ending.